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Yet you're not dead

When I pen you my poison letter
The ink was blood red
Now it has turn to a rusty brown
Yet you're not dead
I have haunted these halls
I have scream out voices from the walls
Yet you're not dead
I have place objects up on the stairs
I have tainted your silverware
Yet you're not dead
When we first fell in love
You promise me a ring
You told me many things
We drifted apart you found a new love
I grew darker from your lies
I hated you like flies
So I sat down with a knife
My wrist I did slice
Using my blood I wrote you
A poison letter filled with hate
Yet you're not dead
As my red blood spilled upon the floor
Slithering out the door
The rug stain the floor boards too
Yet I am dead but not you
I wrote you a poison letter
My red blood the ink
As the years pass blood red
Turns rusty brown
My corpse was never found
Yet you're not dead
I'm haunting you day and night
Hoping you will die from fright
Moaning through the halls
Banging upon the walls
Yet you're not dead
I have watched you growing older
As the house grows colder
Wrinkles adorn your once noble brow
Youth gone as your mind dwindles
Yet you're not dead
I watch you growing weaker
Laying upon your bed
I have hated you for so long
I have wished you dead
You call out to me sometimes
I whisper I am here dear
You smile and whisper back
To forgive you for what you have done
I have held onto my bitter hate
I have lost you is it too late?
Suddenly you gasp for air
I watch your soul leaving your body
Now you are here you are dead like me
The grandfather chimes out your death bells
The gates of heaven open up
As do the gates of hell
I look at you and you fade away
I do to but which way do we go?
For I am still without you

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ok wanted to try something edgar allan poe style lol I think I fell short of that oh well if you like his work it still doesn't mean you will like mine :D

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:iconeimdyel:
edgar allan poe indeed! it's like horror and all that to me. great job Blue!
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Mood: Worried *Applemac12 Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Very Edgar Allen Poe I would say! :faint:
Is this based on personal experience Blue? :? I sure hope not! :cries:
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:iconbluedragoneye:
not unless I am dead and a ghost :giggle:

:cuddle: No worries Vin .....
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*Applemac12 Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Yeah I got that bit figured out!!! :P :giggle:
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:iconbluedragoneye:
yay lol nope I just wanted to try my fingers
at how Poe does his work :D
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*Applemac12 Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Well you did a great job Blue!!! :iconwinner-plz:
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*Applemac12 Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You deserve it Blue! :huggle:
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:iconbluedragoneye:
aw one day I hope you find time to ryhme
Vin so I can tell you how wonderful your
words are.......

ok I can say it now your words Vin are
beautiful and wonderful keep it up love
for your the best :huggle:
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